By Jason Harris
By Jason Harris
This article originally appeared on the Copyblogger website.
5 Secrets an 8-year old Natalie Wood Can Teach You About Persuasive Writing
by Susan Daffron
Like a lot of people, every year my husband and I watch Miracle on 34th Street during the holiday season.
The camera focuses in on Natalie sitting in the back seat of the car staring out the window looking bored and kind of annoyed, mumbling “I believe, I believe …”
Then, there’s a moment where the camera closes in a bit on her eyes as they widen in shock.
She shrieks, “Stop, Uncle Fred! Stop! Stop! Stop!”
The camera angle switches and you see Natalie running up the hill to the house that she had asked Santa Claus to give her.
When it works, the writing takes someone from a neutral state of bored indifference to excitement.
I think of that split-second transition as the “magic moment.”
Considering Natalie Wood was only 8 years old when the movie was made, she does an amazing job of conveying just what happens during that magic moment when suddenly something that seemed impossible becomes real.
To reach that magic moment in your copywriting, here are a 5 secrets you can learn from an 8-year old Natalie.
1. You need a big story
People don’t respond to boring. In fact, one of the worst insults an 8-year old can throw at you is “that’s boring.”
A story like, “What if Santa were real?” gets the attention of pretty much everyone, even those with short attention spans.
In Miracle on 34th Street, even the grandkids of the district attorney knew about the legal case. (And thought grandpa had a whole lot of nerve picking on Santa.)
Is your message something worth sharing? Could it be?
2. You need a big vision
Unlike most kids, instead of asking for a toy, Natalie Wood asks Santa for a house. She hands Kris Kringle a magazine photograph of a house and explains that she doesn’t want a dollhouse. She wants a REAL house.
She says, “If you’re really Santa Claus, you can get it for me. And if you can’t, you’re only a nice man with a white beard, like mother said.”
Natalie had a big vision for what life would be like living in a house in the suburbs versus living in an apartment in the city.
She doesn’t like her Manhattan apartment, and explains that her house would have a back yard with a big tree to put a swing on. She had a clear picture of exactly what she wanted.
With your writing, can you paint a transformative picture that inspires people to fill in the rest using their own imagination?
3. You need a big emotion
People do almost everything for emotional, not rational reasons.
It’s been said that Santa Claus doesn’t need a marketing department. What’s not to love about free gifts for boys and girls around the world? And the “spirit of Christmas” embodies noble emotions like generosity, love, and compassion.
As Kris Kringle says, “Christmas isn’t just a day, it’s a frame of mind.”
In your writing, you need to tap into emotions, whether they are noble like generosity or more negative like fear, greed, and vanity.
After all, there’s no logical reason to believe in Santa Claus or ever eat M&Ms, cookies or doughnuts. Yet people do. Krispy Kreme and Mrs. Fields are ample proof of that.
Why do people continue to buy fat-laden doughnuts and cookies? Because they taste yummy and eating them makes you feel good.
What are your reader’s biggest pain points? What make him feel good?
4. You need big proof
Natalie Wood wants to believe that Kris Kringle is really Santa and looks for proof. At Macy’s she sees him speak Dutch to a little girl and is thrilled to discover he’s not wearing fake padding on his jolly tummy. Then when she tugs on his beard, it doesn’t come off!
She’s excited to tell her mom what she’s learned, but mom raises objections. “Many men have long beards like that” and “I speak French, but I’m not Joan of Arc.”
Many types of proof exist. For example, you might include testimonials in your copy, but that might not be enough. You may need something bigger.
In the movie, the ultimate proof is the existence of the house. (And the real magic is finding the cane tucked into a corner.)
Are you giving people enough reasons to have faith in what you offer? (“Faith is believing in things when common sense tells you not to.”)
5. You need to believe
People want to believe a lot of things they think they can’t do. They might secretly want to travel around the world or write a book.
Generally, there’s no real reason why these people couldn’t travel or write; they just think they can’t.
Good copywriting taps into the emotions and dreams people want to believe anyway. Natalie Wood wanted to believe that Santa would bring her a house, but “common sense” kept telling her it would never happen.
She says, “You were right, Mommy! Mommy said if things don’t turn out right at first…you’ve still got to believe. I kept believing. You were right, Mommy!”
Does your writing give people the joy of realizing a dream they want to believe is possible? Could it?
Of course, in the movie, the logistics of actually buying the house, mom and Fred getting married, moving, and so forth work themselves out. By then, it’s just details.
That’s true of great copy too.
Once the magic moment happens, there’s no turning back.
About the Author: Susan Daffron, aka The Book Consultant owns a book and software publishing company. In addition to teaching aspiring authors about book publishing and putting on the Self-Publishers Online Conference every May, she also just relaunched and is the editor of ComputorCompanion.com, which offers ideas and advice to grow your business.
Have You Heard of Santa’s Traveling Companion, the Krampus?
by Bracken MacLeod
Being more of an every-day-is-Halloween kind of guy, you’d be correct in assuming that I’m not a big fan of Christmas. The enforced cheer, expected gift-giving, and seeming endlessness of the season all leave me feeling colder than a winter Nor’easter. With the renewed interest in an Alpine figure who used to be associated with the holidays, however, some of the cheer of the season has crept into my spirit.
We’re all aware that during this time of year Santa Claus is the figure held up as the arbiter of who has been naughty and nice. Where Santa used to leave bad little children a lump of coal in their stockings instead of presents, his role in children’s programming and as a spokesmodel for a variety of wholesome family products has left him toothless and passive-aggressive (the jolly old elf today simply rebukes unruly children for their wickedness by failing to stop at their houses on Christmas Eve). It wasn’t always so, however. For centuries in Europe, St. Nicholas (the precursor to Santa Claus) has been known to have had a variety of traveling companions entrusted with making sure evil children got their just desserts. In recent years, one in particular is standing head and shoulders above the rest, having made his way to Twenty-First Century America and into my heart.
The Krampus is the ancient embodiment of accountability for wickedness balanced against St. Nicholas’ reward for virtue. He appears as a wild, bestial, goat-like figure wearing chains and bells that foretell his coming. As jolly old St. Nick is out leaving good children gifts and treats as a reward for good behavior, Krampus is prowling the night dishing out punishment for those who have fallen short of his exacting moral standards. He carries with him two fearsome instruments that should quicken the pulse of anyone who has been naughty more often than nice. First is a tied bundle of birch branches known as a “ruten” that he uses to whip naughty children (the beating is euphemistically called a “birching”). Second is a sack or a wooden tub that he wears on his back. Truly rotten children are stuffed in the sack to be taken away for further punishments that may include drowning in a river and/or inclusion in Krampus’ own Christmas dinner.
Unlike the modern Kris Kringle who doles out a half-assed punishment by failing to reward naughty kids (ostensibly making Christmas morning like any ordinary day), the Krampus does twice the work he needs to do just in case you were thinking of doing something bad later. Unwilling to let anyone become too comfortable with their own piety, Krampus still visits good families during the holidays, leaving them small gold-colored rutenas a reminder to remain morally upright. Krampus visits the good and bad alike — the holiday version of Scared Straight.
Although Krampusnacht is typically celebrated in parts of Europe on December 5 (the night before the Feast of St. Nicholas) with parades, elaborate Krampus costumes, and public birchings, I am as happy as a little school child to find that he has started to infiltrate the whole of the holiday season. Being a horror writer and fan, it really brings opens up the splendor and joy of the season to have my own Christmas demon waiting in the wings to inject a little horror into the holidays and scare the bejeepers out of everyone whether they need an attitude adjustment or not.
Gruβ vom Krampus!
Bracken MacLeod is a member of the NEHW.